Thursday, February 21, 2013

Revising Your Thesis Statement


Homework: Writing a Thesis Statement
Due: Friday, February 22nd

What to turn in Friday:
1.Thesis statement
2.All advertisements you are analyzing
3.An analysis of each advertisement

Things to remember:

1.     Your thesis statement MUST be related to one of the three essay topics assigned.
2.    A thesis statement is not a question.
3.    A thesis statement is not a topic or “I want to write about…”
4.    A thesis statement requires you to think.
5.    A thesis statement should be SPECIFIC.


Helpful examples:

If you chose Essay Topic 1:
(Compare and contrast two advertisements from the McDonald’s ads focusing on persuasive techniques, message, and audience.)

Example: “While both advertisements use humor to persuade the audience, they use different types of humor and people of different ages in the advertisements as a way of appealing to teenagers and adults.”

Explanation: The rest of you paper would explain the different types of humor used in each advertisement and the different types of people in each advertisement and how each advertisement appeals to a different audience.


If you chose Essay Topic 2:
(Choose three advertisements that target the same audience and explain the different techniques they use.)

Example: “After analyzing a variety of McDonald’s advertisements, it is evident that McDonald’s makes use of three types of persuasive techniques—celebrities, plain folks, and association—to appeal to the teenage audience.”

Explanation: Your paper would then explain how each advertisement uses that persuasive technique and how each advertisement appeals to the teenage audience.


If you chose Essay Topic 3: (Choose one persuasive technique and explain how multiple McDonald’s advertisements use that technique to persuade you.)

Example: “McDonald’s uses the persuasive technique bandwagon in a variety of ways to appeal to their audience, including _____________, ____________, and ______________.

Explanation: Your paper would explain how McDonald’s makes use of the bandwagon technique to persuade their audience. 

How to Write a Thesis Statement


What is a thesis statement?
A thesis statement
-tells the reader how you will interpret the significance of the subject matter under discussion.
-is a road map for the paper; in other words, it tells the reader what to expect from the rest of the paper.
-directly answers the question asked of you.

A thesis statement makes a claim that others might dispute.
It is usually a single sentence somewhere in your first paragraph that presents your argument to the reader.
The rest of the paper, the body of the essay, gathers and organizes evidence that will persuade the reader of the logic of your interpretation.

Three traits of a good thesis statement:

1. A good thesis statement is short and simple: it should be no longer than one sentence, regardless of essay length.
2. A good thesis statement is limited to one main idea.
3. A good thesis statement is a declaration (not a question) sentence with no words like might, maybe, or perhaps.




Paper Assignment: Due March 7th

McDonald's Advertising Analytical Paper

What is an analytical paper?


An analytical paper breaks down an issue or an idea into its component parts, evaluates the issue or idea, and presents this breakdown and evaluation to the audience.

Paper Assignment
Choose from one of the three topics:
1.Compare and contrast two advertisements from the McDonald’s ads focusing on persuasive techniques, message, and audience.
2.Choose three advertisements that target the same audience and explain the different techniques they use.
3.Choose one persuasive technique and explain how multiple McDonald’s advertisements use that technique to persuade you.

First steps:
1.You’ve already analyzed 4 advertisements.
2.Choose one of the paper topics to write about.
3.Begin formulating an argument.
4.Write a thesis statement.



Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Advertising Analysis Checklist


A helpful handout you'll receive in class tomorrow:

Checklist for Advertising Analysis

For each advertisement you analyze, make sure you’ve answered each question that follows. If you haven’t, you probably haven’t analyzed the advertisement fully and completely. A thorough analysis picks every piece of the advertisement apart. You should be thinking about each advertisement, not just quickly writing, “It’s telling you to buy product X.”
1.     Did you incorporate the verbal message (what’s written on the page) and the visual message (the images on the page) into your overall analysis of the message? This is where you should analyze every part of the ad and question why the advertisers chose to put each detail in the advertisement.

2.     Did you explain exactly what the advertisement wants you to do?

3.     How does the advertisement persuade you to do what they want you to do? In other words, did you explain the persuasive techniques?

4.     If you identified persuasive techniques in the advertisement, did you explain how they used them? In other words, if they used bribery to persuade you, you should explain HOW exactly they use bribery. Example: “The advertisement offers a free subscription to a magazine if the consumer purchases ten mocha lattes.”

5.     Did you explain what impact the persuasive technique has on the message? Does it strengthen the message? Is it effective? Does it appeal to a certain audience?

6.     Did you identify a specific audience for the advertisement? Did you get REALLY specific? What race, class, gender, age, religion, etc. did the company want to buy this product? How do you know? What is in the advertisement that suggests this to you? Example: The Jennifer Hudson Weight Watchers advertisement is targeting young, African American females as its audience (although others could be easily persuaded) because they use a beautiful, young African American celebrity to endorse their product.

7.     Finally, did you think creatively? Did you really analyze the advertisement? Did you break apart each and every detail? Did you spend more than ten minutes? Good. Spend ten more.  

Basic Persuasive Techniques

Did you forget (or lose!) your basic persuasive techniques handout? In addition to it being on Jupiter Grades, here is the information:

Basic persuasion techniques
1. Association. This persuasion technique tries to link a product, service, or idea with something already liked or desired by the target audience, such as fun, pleasure, beauty, security, intimacy, success, wealth, etc. The media message doesn’t make explicit claims that you’ll get these things; the association is implied. Association can be a very powerful technique.  A good ad can create a strong emotional response and then associate that feeling with a brand (family = Coke, victory = Nike).  This process is known as emotional transfer.  Several of the persuasion techniques below, like Beautiful people, Warm & fuzzy, Symbols and Nostalgia, are specific types of association.
2. Bandwagon. Many ads show lots of people using the product, implying that "everyone is doing it" (or at least, "all the cool people are doing it"). No one likes to be left out or left behind, and these ads urge us to "jump on the bandwagon.” Politicians use the same technique when they say, "The American people want..." How do they know?
3. Beautiful people. Beautiful people uses good-looking models (who may also be celebrities) to attract our attention. This technique is extremely common in ads, which may also imply (but never promise!) that we’ll look like the models if we use the product.
4. Bribery. This technique tries to persuade us to buy a product by promising to give us something else, like a discount, a rebate, a coupon, or a "free gift.” Sales, special offers, contests, and sweepstakes are all forms of bribery. Unfortunately, we don’t really get something for free -- part of the sales price covers the cost of the bribe. 
5. Celebrities.  (A type of Testimonial – the opposite of Plain folks.) We tend to pay attention to famous people. That’s why they’re famous! Ads often use celebrities to grab our attention. By appearing in an ad, celebrities implicitly endorse a product; sometimes the endorsement is explicit. Many people know that companies pay celebrities a lot of money to appear in their ads (Nike’s huge contracts with leading athletes, for example, are well known) but this type of testimonial still seems to be effective. 
6. Experts.  (A type of Testimonial.) We rely on experts to advise us about things that we don’t know ourselves. Scientists, doctors, professors and other professionals often appear in ads and advocacy messages, lending their credibility to the product, service, or idea being sold.  Sometimes, Plain folks can also be experts, as when a mother endorses a brand of baby powder or a construction worker endorses a treatment for sore muscles.
7. Explicit claims.  Something is "explicit" if it is directly, fully, and/or clearly expressed or demonstrated.  For example, some ads state the price of a product, the main ingredients, where it was made, or the number of items in the package – these are explicit claims.  So are specific, measurable promises about quality, effectiveness, or reliability, like “Works in only five minutes!” Explicit claims can be proven true or false through close examination or testing, and if they’re false, the advertiser can get in trouble. It can be surprising to learn how few ads make explicit claims. Most of them try to persuade us in ways that cannot be proved or disproved.
8. Fear. This is the opposite of the Association technique. It uses something disliked or feared by the intended audience (like bad breath, failure, high taxes or terrorism) to promote a "solution.” Ads use fear to sell us products that claim to prevent or fix the problem. Politicians and advocacy groups stoke our fears to get elected or to gain support.
9. Humor. Many ads use humor because it grabs our attention and it’s a powerful persuasion technique. When we laugh, we feel good. Advertisers make us laugh and then show us their product or logo because they’re trying to connect that good feeling to their product. They hope that when we see their product in a store, we’ll subtly re-experience that good feeling and select their product. Advocacy messages (and news) rarely use humor because it can undermine their credibility; an exception is political satire.
10. Intensity. The language of ads is full of intensifiers, including superlatives (greatest, best, most, fastest, lowest prices), comparatives (more, better than, improved, increased, fewer calories), hyperbole (amazing, incredible, forever), exaggeration, and many other ways to hype the product.
11. Maybe. Unproven, exaggerated or outrageous claims are commonly preceded by "weasel words" such as may, might, can, could, some, many, often, virtually, as many as, or up to. Watch for these words if an offer seems too good to be true. Commonly, the Intensity and Maybe techniques are used together, making the whole thing meaningless. 
12. Plain folks.  (A type of Testimonial – the opposite of Celebrities.) This technique works because we may believe a "regular person" more than an intellectual or a highly-paid celebrity.  It’s often used to sell everyday products like laundry detergent because we can more easily see ourselves using the product, too. The plain folks technique strengthens the down-home, "authentic" image of products like pickup trucks and politicians. Unfortunately, most of the "plain folks" in ads are actually paid actors carefully selected because they look like "regular people.”
13. Repetition. Advertisers use repetition in two ways: Within an ad or advocacy message, words, sounds or images may be repeated to reinforce the main point. And the message itself (a TV commercial, a billboard, a website banner ad) may be displayed many times. Even unpleasant ads and political slogans work if they are repeated enough to pound their message into our minds.
14. Testimonials. Media messages often show people testifying about the value or quality of a product, or endorsing an idea. They can be experts, celebrities, or plain folks. We tend to believe them because they appear to be a neutral third party (a pop star, for example, not the lipstick maker, or a community member instead of the politician running for office.)  This technique works best when it seems like the person “testifying” is doing so because they genuinely like the product or agree with the idea.  Some testimonials may be less effective when we recognize that the person is getting paid to endorse the product.
15. Warm & fuzzy. This technique uses sentimental images (especially of families, kids and animals) to stimulate feelings of pleasure, comfort, and delight. It may also include the use of soothing music, pleasant voices, and evocative words like "cozy" or "cuddly.” The Warm & fuzzy technique is another form of Association.  It works well with some audiences, but not with others, who may find it too corny.
Taken from: http://medialiteracyproject.org/language-persuasion


Monday, February 11, 2013

Tuesday, February 12, 2013





Here are the ads. You're more than welcome to google more!






















Monday, February 11, 2013

Today we reviewed audience, speaker, message, and persuasive techniques. After reviewing, the students took a quiz! 

Here are the slides from today's lesson: